Part 1 🔫🔫 The Murder in Rain 🔫🔫

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Part 1 
🔫🔫 The Murder in Rain 🔫🔫



It was a rainy night; and it was much more than cats and dogs. Wind and thick clouds were in rain's favor.

The electricity in the whole city of Leon was cut out by rain. No television, no internet, no nothing for entertainment. A few sounds of old radios could be heard but the sound soon died off; due to its battery or people got bored.

It was 1:00am now. It was pitch dark in Leon, and it was still raining hard and it hadn't reduced a bit. Everyone was asleep except a few dogs you could see in a bus stop.

Walking on the road was impossible. The water would reach the knees of a six footer. It was like rivers on the roads.

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**Somewhere in a abandoned shelter (Maybe an old shop)**

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There was a..a..a murder. With a gun or a pistol to be more precise.

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A random man passing by the shelter noticed the pool of blood flowing with yesterday's rainwater.

He then went in was shocked to see the scenario.

He immediately called police. Soon enough police was there.

The body was kept on a steel table with blood around on all sides.

The police marked the outline of the body.

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The case was handed over to Inspector Ajay Sharma. He was a handsome, skillful and honest inspector. He was always the most trusted inspector in the city of Leon.

He was offered a higher post but he clearly refused and replied that he could do more about the problem in the position he was.

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Ajay Sharma visited the crime scene.

"Hmm…." He said and went to the main gate of the shop.

There was a medical store and a wholesale shop in visibility.

"I want to see the CCTV footages of both these shops." Said Ajay to Hawaldar Balbir. "Yes Sahib" he replied.

Ajay returned to the police station and was thinking something.

Just then Balbir returned with the CDs of the footages and said, "Sahib, wholesale shop's CCTV is damaged and this is the footage of the medical store."

They saw the footage and it revealed the first clue…

Something black… A spot? A animal? A man ?

What was it !

To be continued… 

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Read the next blog to know what the clue was.

Thank you for reading hope you enjoyed

Comments

  1. UnknownNovember 18, 2020 at 12:23 AM

    👍👍👍👍

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  2. KamelNovember 18, 2020 at 1:06 AM

    Sherlock Homes...

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  3. UnknownNovember 18, 2020 at 1:16 AM

    Hey,Apurv here.really nice

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  4. UnknownNovember 18, 2020 at 1:29 AM

    Very interesting.I m anxious to know what happened then

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  5. UnknownNovember 18, 2020 at 1:34 AM

    Very good going Likhit... Continue writing... Be a best seller one day

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  6. SureshNovember 18, 2020 at 3:42 AM

    Superb Likhit .....i am very keen to know what is next.......😊💐✨💫👍🏻

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  7. UnknownNovember 18, 2020 at 9:57 AM

    Too good and suspense

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  8. ShraddhasVoiceNovember 18, 2020 at 10:43 AM

    Interesting build up and nice description of rainy night Likhit! All hanging in suspense now....eagerly waiting for next part!! 👌

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  9. KomalBondeNovember 18, 2020 at 1:41 PM

    Komal Bonde : Great work... Keep going 👍👍

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  10. Bhushan NeheteNovember 18, 2020 at 6:21 PM

    Great 👌

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  11. UnknownDecember 2, 2020 at 11:26 PM

    Great Likhit,
    Keep it up

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