Secrets In The Shadows

 The Zombie Train

Note - 

There are going to be two versions of this story, this is the unfiltered write-up (brain-to-paper kind of.)

The other version is going to be a filtered version with a lot more build-up.

I thought of just sharing this version to get opinions for the final version.

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It had been too over two hours waiting for the train. Rahee was getting restless.
Suddenly she saw rumbling of the tracks. Two bright yellow lights peeked through the tunnel. They were getting closer She got scared and backed a step. It then stopped.
It was the train.
Finally after two hours the train was finally there. It was roughly 3:00am. She got onto the train and walked through the dark train corridor with no lights turned on. The place was awfully quiet. Even though the train was at full capacity she felt no presence. She was exhausted so she found her compartment, unloaded her luggage and went to sleep.
It was shortly after, she woke up. She had to use the bathroom. It was still dark outside she trotted, looking for the bathroom, oddly enough she couldn't find one.
She decided to look for someone who was awake & ask them. She knocked at each door, but no one answered. She decided to open a door only to find two people sleeping, except something just wasn’t right. They weren't moving at all, damn they weren't breathing.
She uncovered their faces shivering. It was a corpse. She collapsed. She was terrified. Her muscles stopped working. It was just then the corpse woke up. A zombie. She was on a zombie train. The train hooted, it was about reach a station. But alas she had woken all of them up
She had no time to take her luggage. She pushed through them, a zombie bit her hand, but she kept moving and jumped off the train to have a leg fracture and a couple of shoulder injuries, only to see the next set of passengers board the train.
She screamed, "Don't go!" but her efforts in vain they had already boarded the train.